http://miracleshining.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] miracleshining.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] melodyprower11 2011-03-31 09:39 am (UTC)

I think you're off to a good start using this as a serious plot device. You've presented the story thus far with a strong base that this is a dramatic piece.

Though I'm sure that there will be charming and of course cute moments, I'm intrigued to see how this will go when we have an adult Geng still dealing with his feelings for a now child Hae.

I look forward to the developments and thank you!

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